work on it
ok, some pointers.
1.)wear sumthin else
2.)better animation
3.)longer
4.)more sounds
5.)have a PLOT
thats it i hope to see more though.
p.s.
this is an idea done few times before you, master this and youll be an in newgrounds celeb with this idea. Sure people will rip u off, but youll be one of the first and the best. so do some work.